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高中英语作文1400字：惋惜之情:在警察局里-At the Police Station 在警察局里【内容提示】 暑假期间，为了了解社会你参加了一次公安局对罪犯的审讯活动。被审讯的人是一名19岁的吸毒者。你旁听了公安人员和罪犯的对话后对这个年轻人很是惋惜。请你写一篇文章表达你的惋惜之情。 【作文示范】 at the police station during the summer vacation, i had a chance to visit a police station in order to learn something about society. there i caught sight of a drug addict①. that day, i was reading a dossier of a case② in the office when a young man was brought in. “how old are you?”a policeman asked. “nineteen,”the man answered in a low voice. “how long have you been taking drugs?” “for 3 years.” on hearing this, i was very surprised. now i knew how he had become so thin, so pale and so weak. drugtaking③ cost him so much money that he had to steal. as a result he was caught. “now i realize i was wrong. i feel i have let my mother down who has been ill for a long time and is always worried about me. but now…i must die. i must die…．” nineteen is a golden age. at this age he could have been at school or in the army or on a farm if he had not taken drugs. his case proves the truth of a chinese saying：“a moment＇s error can bring a lifelong regret.④” （选自《英语画刊》高中版1997年第4期） 【词语解释】 ①drug addict [＇dr)g +＇dikt] 吸毒者 ②a dossier [＇d&siei]of a case 一起案件材料 ③drug-taking n．吸毒 ④a moment＇s error can bring a lifelong regret.一失足成千古恨。 【写法指要】 本文用夹叙夹议的手法写了对一个失足青年的惋惜之情。第一、二段是叙述，写时间、地点和事件；第三段是议论，写作者听到警察与吸毒青年的交谈后的感想；第四段叙述该罪犯忏悔的表白；第五段又是议论，抒发惋惜之情；第六段引用一句中国格言结束全文。 |